Needs more edge
~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was pretty good i thought but it does tend to get abit repetitive, maybe you could {SEPERATE} it somewhat or even add a {MIX} in it as it did have a repetitive feel and such, it needed a more {PUSH} to it and needed more of that {EDGE} that could really bring it forward, but for the mostpart i thought it was alright and liked it but again needed that push. anyways hope to hear more from you soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above it could use more {VARIATION} and more {PUSH} to it.