This is fresh shit man!
This is sweet ass shit, but the beat could be something so much fatter, so much more bad ass. Hitch up the drums, get some growling bass in there, or if that ain't your shit, some old school rhythm n blues samples beef up the tune, give me something i wanna swag it too, not this cool but ultimately tame beat. Nah, its a helluva riff, no messin, but that's not all there is to the art of hip hop. I could give more specific advice on beat making to Zu, just some core ass useful shit specifically if you wanna PM me.
However, the vocals are sweet asss some nice double recordings, give the vocals some real fucking momentum. A lot of lyrical talent and vocal skill, no mistake. For that I'll give you 4 and an 8, mostly for the serious vocal prowess right here.
If youd upload the vocals, I'd be bare joyous with remixing this shit.
8 & 10
Love & peace
thanx for tha review homie i appreciate it for the good criticism, theres alot of haters on here that just hate and downgrade shit for no reason. good look on tha feedback i'll talk to my producer of the group who recorded it and zu to see if i can get permission to let me get the vocal track. check out our other song rap game if you get tha chance, i'd like to hear what you would have to say about that track. be coo homie, later
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.