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The Illist

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All lyrics written by myself. song was produced by Jboi. mixing and mastering also done by jboi.

(Verse 1)
Hey what up homies? Let me make my introduction into the game
With lyrical eruptions that'll lead to destruction and mind abduction
Through my discussion, if you ain't ready for BHK here's a sample called Renegade
To get you use to rappers whose lyrically eerie, Vocabulary's a rarity,
My mind works as a dictionary there's no comparing to how my lyrics has your brain deteriorating
You can say it's fascinating, cause in all actuality my mentality is spitting lyrical brutalities
When the beat starts it sparks a schizophrenic personality
Which is allowing me to use my analogies as my indestructible Calvary

(Verse 2)
Wit my resiliency I'm gonna succeed 'till I'm royalty,
Accordingly, rappers sink because they have no buoyancy
They're a one hit wonder, they arise and then fall under the surface
Into the sewer, or get grilled like skewers
I'm gonna lyrically maneuver, sooner than later, my way into the game
And then just laugh at these hater's. Ya'll are just parities trying to bring my career into severity
But I'm inheriting clarity.
My visions no longer obscure, I'm gonna cure my life until it's pure and yes I'm sure
That my lyrical damage is critical, you see I'm at my pinnacle.
While ya'll are lyrical criminals with creativity at it's minimal

(Verse 3)
I'm a representation of BHK's presentation, call us the game's revelations
We steppin' in to change rotation. Ya'll are defacin' the greatest thing to happen to this nation
And I'mma be honest, it's kind of irritating
It's outrageous how the game goes from being courageous to cowards snitching for power
'Bout time they get devoured into a ratio of zero from a lyrical hero whose gonna venture into the game with a temper and bring a new texture of embers with my gestures
Until these rappers are proved that they are jesters
And it's certain that ya'll are just a burden
You're a minnow in the ocean and I'mma serpent ready to attack
And it's a fact that ya'll are never gonna lyrically grow
So ya'll better back up or put your stacks up
You can never deny that we reaching for the sky ready to pulverize anybody with a doubt inside of their simple little minds
Keep on hatin'....we got the evidence proving your sentences are repetitive
Your flows are limited, my vocab's limitless and my sickness is from my quickness inside of my deliverance there's no equivalent
That's why I got you feeling it, when I be spilling it
So why don't ya'll just sit back and watch me gain my respect and reflect the light and shine and redefine the way to spit the illist rhyme



Really digging the rhyme scheme man. Some good stuff there for sure. As far as delivery goes, I think it feels like you could use a bit more excitement.
About the beat, it's good, but has some mixing issues. The drums need to be brought forth more into the mix mainly, and the lower end is missing in parts of the beat.

Still, great stuff

very creative

I like the entire song, the lyrics and the beat now i dont have any experience when it comes to putting a song together but maybe the bass could be a little deeper hard hitting or maybe that is how you wanted it but again the song is great overall

work on your style

let me just say your delivery is standard...nothing special....its like your just reading it off paper. Keep it up though, I'm trying to start rappin too, and i just cant spit a written out and have the same enthusiasm as speaking off the top of my dome while listening to a track. But your lyrics are tight.

quite good. i think.

i think this is awesome. (y)

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Credits & Info

Feb 18, 2010
9:41 PM EST
File Info
3.3 MB
3 min 35 sec
2.81 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.