Strangely out of key...
I can hear what the piece is supposed to sound like, but it seems that you're playing notes that are just off where you want to be. Perhaps a little flat in places, so tightening up on the sound of them there would certainly help you.
There is definitely a sense of creepy music in this one, as if akin to a haunted house of some kind, where you're not sure exactly where you are, let alone how you got there, or how to get out. There is some sort of serenity there, that might be a ray of sunshine peeking through a boarded up window here and there, but it still feels rather eerie.
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