A lot better
This actually sounds a lot better than your last one which contained quite terrible audio quality, glad to see you have improved this time around, great job you did. That new mic seems to have helped you a lot.
Beat: Sounds rather simple and cheesy, why not make your own the next time around? See what kind of beat you can make it.
Vocals: Sounds pretty good actually, possibly post lyrics for people who can't understand what you're saying at all.
Overall: This can't really improve actually, nice job.
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thanks for the review.
I agree the track is quite simple but i suppose its a easy beat for me to rap to. i could try making my own beat but don't have that sorta program.
I have tried before on Mixcraft.. FL Studio.. Cubase Essential.. and i was ok, but nothing amazing. but if it helps my track, i will try.
Vocals: yeah i understand, this is a freestyle rap and a lot of Lyrics even i cant make out now. i have tried to sit down and right a track properly but it doesn't flow as well as freestyle. i really need to work on writing songs.
Thank you soooooo MUCH! you guys on NG have helped a lot i will implement your Suggestions.. thank you again.