[MC Crispy] - Fast Pace Game

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not very good.. but i try.



Wow this is rly good, but as the person 2 reviews below points out you need to work on your breathing...but overall rly good i could never sing like that :P

chrisG755 responds:

Thanks i have better tracks as well!

You want a new mic for Xmas

It's not a bad start, but there are two main issues here:

1) You need a new mic - try looking on eBay, as there are some good deals for around £50. This will get you a much better sound quality for the piece overall. Perhaps having a look at some tutorials for Audacity, or whatever sound program you use would help, as you could do with work on equalising it as well, but that's a minor issue.

2) The pace. Your rapping is a little on the quick side. Slow it down, as you're forcing your lyrics to go along with the beat. Relax, take a few slow, deep breaths and let it flow. Practice makes perfect.

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chrisG755 responds:

thanks a lot, my highest review yet, and yes i have asked my parents for a mic for Christmas which hopefully i'll get hehe.. but yeah i need to work on breathing but thank you anyway.

Bad sound quality

The sound quality of this entry is very bad, the backing track can be hardly heard. Also there are statics all over the place when you rap.

The technique seems to be very good. Especially in the beginning your rapping sounds very natural, but later on in the song it seems as if there are some pauses where you have to catch some breath where there shouldn't be pauses (for example at 1:36), but maybe that's just me.

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chrisG755 responds:

yeah true, i really do need to work on breathing. thanks 4 the review

Ehh, needs major improvements

I must say, this needs major work and you possibly need a new mic and mixing system so the voice doesn't sound so distant as well. Also I just really hear the first sound a lot from the first 3 seconds, the rest isn't all that audible.

Voice/lyrics: Kind of doesn't make all that much since and I'd suggest a new microphone before making another song since at one or two points it kind of gets way too loud and scratchy and pop sounding. Change this up.

Ahh sound: I hear that a lot and it's pretty much one of the audible pieces here that sounds pretty good to me which is nice but I don't think that's the sound you were wishing to be heard overall eh?

Drum 'n' bass: Sounds pretty good and a simple beat but not audible enough to be heard well.

Scratch sound: Nice touch although you'd have to turn this up a bit to hear it when it enters the song at different intervals.

Overall: Get a new sound and mixing system so it's easier to hear. If you decide to resubmit a better version of this it'd be nice if you left this one up so people can do a side by side comparison and see if there s till needs to be any changes.

Good luck on future pieces.

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2.84 / 5.00

Dec 5, 2009
4:39 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
3.7 MB
2 min 40 sec

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