Awesome; Could Be Better...
This is awesome! The key sounded a bit awkward at 1:10 and other spots just like this, but the bass was great, along with the dampening. I really like the speed up and pitch change at 1:33. The melody at 1:46 is catchy. A note at 2:01 sounded a bit funny as well. Maybe the section could be redone. Overall, this song is okay, much better than previous versions. The things that I pointed out are just minor things. I feel that song could go a lot more faster. Heavier bass would also be better.
Good job,
- Injabie3