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Uploaded
Dec 9, 2009 | 1:59 AM EST
File Info
Song
7.6 MB
3 min 19 sec
Score
3.83 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.83 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
648 Plays | 48 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

Revision after revision after revision... and I finally came up with this. However it most likely wont be the final version of this song (as I seem to come up with new ideas for it 2 or more times a day).

Please give any and all thoughts on this song, thank you so much in advance!

-Monte

Reviews


PandaguruPandaguru

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Huge Improvement!

Nice dude, its starting to turn into something that I would definitely enjoy dancing to at a club or something. Ill break my review down into things I like, then things that have to be changed and finally then artistic suggestions.

I really liked your change of instruments. I also liked the effects that you applied, it makes it sound much more professional. It also has a really nice punchy beat, which is great for a dance song. The ending effect was good.

You need to add another instrument to harmonize with the melody at some point during the song. I was thinking at a natural point around halfway. The song is too long not to add another part or even more to it. You also need some sort of break from the melody into something different somewhere after the halfway point. As reviewers are comparing you to BassHunter, listen to Welcome To Rainbow. He has a nice break in there.

Ok, this is where it goes more subjective and depends on artistic vision. I agree that it is too slow, however, I think what you should do is keep it at that speed for one run through of your complete melodic pattern and then speed it up with a nice transition. I think that would be really cool. I, personally, would also try to patch up the melody even more and make it even more catchy. You have a perfectly fine melody, don't get me wrong, it just is missing that characteristic that leaves me humming it after I listen to it.

You have made a lot of progress, but you still have a lot of work to do. Keep at it and keep me informed, I am very curious to see how this little baby turns out.



audie103audie103

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Just a TAD slow

but good, nonetheless. Definitely a dance, just up the beat and maybe add either another instrument up front here and there in a high or low pitch (for a little variation given the length). I like, though.



ForestLomnForestLomn

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great! Just a little bit...

repetitive. But still a sweet techno beat:) (Reviewed, return the favor;) )