Pretty Spiffy...

Nice Intro. The beginning chords were nice. Sounds like typical techno songs. It would be nice I you added a little more bass, as it had maybe a little too much treble in it, but doesn't matter, still good, still good. Also, a soft background melody would be nice, as well. Agreed with DJ-Chilvan, this has a lot of potential. Thumbs Up. Expecting more in times to come.

Read my FB review

Yea, I left a review for you on there. But ya, this is pretty nice, i would really love to see an extended version which is way more complex. This song has so much potential.
I noticed that you have other advice from other reviews, and the advice they gave is pretty great. I told you. Now you see...
just take their reviews and practice...

- The Black Kid from School

Oldschool Basshunter?

Very minimal stuff here, percussion sounds like it's suited for House, and the generic chord progression brings out the Basshunter side of it. The melody itself sounds like his style as well.

Good job here, I suggest you work on finding a better synth to work with, something more powerful. I suggest your percussion to be punchier to fit the mood as well.

Good work!

5/5
-PdG-
Check out some of my work for some experimental tracks and such, you may stumble upon something you may like.

The Magic Chords

I see you have found the magic chords. Have fun with them, as they truly are magic.

There is a lot of potential in this one buddy. Here is some advice to keep you going.

I found the melody a bit too random. If you could really work on making a catchy one with a bit more of a ptter that at the same time wasn't too repetitive that would be great.

Also, some more tracks are needed. There are many times during the song where the song was just too simple. You need to add some more depth.

Finally, you need to mess around with your arsenal of pitch changing, tempo changing, octave changing etc. tools so you can spice things up as the song progresses.

Good work for your 7th try though and keep it on coming!

Awesome

I gota say, the simplistic instruments with the more complexed melody makes for an awesome middle ground. good deal.