sad sad song thanks for putting it up .
No problem, dude.
I think that the reason your ending isn't well liked is beacuse it doesn't sound like an ending, but like a lead in to another chapter of the song. You could easily turn this into some epic song of not only sorrow, but a whole range of emotion. I think that if you morphed your piano lead into something a little higher, maybe a flute, you could turn it cheerful without losing the overall essence of the song. I like where its been, and i look forward to where it could go!
To be honest I didn't like the ending aswell. When I finished this "extended" version I figured something is missing. Maybe it was exactly this. The short happy ending that "should/could" lead into something more. But unfortunately I made the decision of not improving it anymore.
Thanks for reviewing :)
an ok song with potential
The song is good just needs some tweaking. Beginning was good. The piano makes a good background but it is ok as a main melody. I'm not sure but I think it was a violin that came in around 1:40. That was a nice touch. Although I'm not sure I liked what I heard at around 2:24. The whole song already wasn't very sorrowful and that is more of a joyful tune. The ending also took away from the calmness which the song had in the beginning. The ending I think was too abrupt. But that's my opinion. I'm used to these kinds of songs fading out and sometimes even silence in the end. The loop was better, since it didn't have this ending. That better than Ekron's review? I hope you start improving it.
Put some synths in there and you could probably put it in the ambience category.
Thank you for this detailed review.
Since I decided to not improve this song any further I'm grateful for your suggestions.
Thank you again.
I liked how
It happied up at the end :) lovely piece, both the original and this one, 10/10 5/5
It started out as a good song but the ending is most likly the worst one i have ever heard.
Thanks, this was by far the best review of all times.
You could at least write down what should be improved next time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.