Quite enjoyable.
It's rather unfortunate that a potential artist like you don't get the chance to improve with the lack of reviews; however it's great to see that you use with what you have and try your best.
After listening to this for a few times, there were a few interpretations that came to mind. But they all revolved around chasing something that they were going to lose or never had. I suppose it's all the matter of what things we have already experience in life to be able to see different things in music. Regardless, there is a feel of a story being told. Much like a plot graph learned in English class, there is the build up to a climax which then follows a resolution.
As for the music itself, I love the build up and the ending of the piece. Of course, I'm not knowledgeable in music by any means, but I found the grace notes to be pretty nice in the end. It gave contrast to the most part where the rhythm was rather straight and simple. I think that it's great you're willing to try various genres. It's an advantage to when you get a fan base and they start to expect certain music. You still have some freedom with what you make.
In the end, I think you're doing pretty well in making enjoyable music. At least I'm enjoying it and perhaps if people visit and listen to your songs, more people will enjoy and comment too. :) I'd doubt many people would read verbose comments like mine. Though I partly blame my English assignment which I was working on while listening to your lovely tune. Anyway, congrats on making a nice track and I'm looking forward to see your next submission. :D
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