Well...

The melody is ok. But the kick sounds a bit...hmm not sure how to put it. Just weird. Plus the song doesnt change too much so just condense it. No need to be that long since nothing changes too much. So like when the melody switches up a bit. Just make it do that a little earlier. It would sound better then stretching everything out.

7/10 3.5/5 just cause it was a little long and un changing to hold my interest.