I loved this =). It was catchy and really captured a low dark mood i like that =). I will do my best to give you advice don't take it as in the wrong way i just know that as a music artist myself i love it when people give me tons of criticism and advice stuffz.
1. I didn't like the reverse crash so much it wasn't so smooth but there are a few things you can do to fix that. You can put it a few notes higher or you can add a "Fruity Chorus" on it to let up on the roughness of it or you can use the "Fruity EQ" to take out the lower parts of it =).
2. I would add more instruments in the background. The bass is really nice and pretty much helps fill the song already but some pads or strings or some arps in the background could REALLY liven this song up ;).
This was REALLY good! I like how you keep bring things in and out of the beat thats one huge factor a lot of people miss and i love it! Awesome stuff here dude keep up the amazing work and if you ever need help or a review just pm me =).
Keep it up!!!
(I really enjoyed this)
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