All in the timing.
Well. Lemmie start off with what's good.
1: It's true to the original work.
2: You wouldn't need the title to recognize what it is, always important when creating a remix.
3: Made from scratch, not just a rework of the original by chopping it into pieces (or at least good enough to make it sound like that)
Now the not so good:
1: Watch your timing. A couple of key notes seemed like they might be an eighth or 16th off, and it sorta threw the song out.
2: Make sure to keep some sort of constant through similar parts of the song. Your volume layers shouldn't change except for a short-term effect or intro/outro. ex: the main beat gets quieter at around 0:44 and it's REALLY detrimental
3: Outro's a bit weak. Even if the radio edit of the song cuts off like that, it's probably best to build in a bit of an ending closer to the intro.
Overall it's pretty decent, but I can't honestly say it's something I'd put on my iTouch. Rated 4 over there (<---) as 3.5 rounds up
If I were you, I might take this back into FL (I presume that's what you used) and retouch it a little. Could get to a 5 with maybe a week's worth of work.
lol yea i no what your talking about..... well i have this file on my FL for like a year so its really old and to tell you the truth i just got a MIDI of better off alone and put in better sounds and made the entire percussion cause there is no way in hell i would have been able to re create so accurately.....And my friend did the celestial not me so its off i no but i didnt feel like fixing it.... but i will just to get better ratings and some fucker rated it a 0 so it went from 5 to 3.45 or something.... i mean 2 ppl voted it it 5 and then one guy thought he was cool and rated it a 0. but thankyou for the very helpful review and hey check out my clocks remix and no i didnt use a MIDI file for it i actually re created the melody of clocks so yea check that out and then tell me how you liked it.... Thank you
it's a mello song
I had bad day be for i herd thet's
ha ha thx man lol i didnt think it was that good but i mean if you listen to it its really not that bad! and like i said its a remix.... But hey its not too bad. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.