That's what I'm talking about!
I like this song a lot! In my opinion, it's one of your better songs. The melody is very catchy and the drums are very good.
Starting off, the intro is a little pop-punky with a nice heavy feel. This caught my attention and I wasn't sure I'd like the guitar, but it's actually really good. I really like how you kept the drums simple here and let the guitar do the talking. I really like the guitar line at 0:14. It has a very catchy rhythm and the bass and drums don't fight it.
The little drum section at 0:30 fits the song mood perfectly. I like how you carry the guitar on after this part. It makes it feel like a real rock song, this part being the verse. I noticed a little bit of a skip at 0:36. I thought it was my computer, but it keeps doing it at the same spot. That's just a file problem though.
The switch at 0:45 is a little sudden, but it still fits. I really like this part a lot and I think it's the best part, especially at 0:54. I'd personally make it go another 8 or 16 bars. Seems like a good place for some lyrics. The guitar line is just perfect here, and even though the bass is really fast, it fits perfectly. I also love the drum line.
I'd leave 1:02 - 1:33 alone. This part is awesome the way it is and I cannot in good conscious tell you to change anything about it. I would, however, repeat the bars from 1:29 - 1:33 a few times. It starts getting good, but you end it. The ending sweep is good, and I like the slight tempo change.
Sounds to me like you have a really good start on this one. This is the kind of stuff you should work on. It's not too random and the drums are all crazy. This is a very decent track!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.