hmmm
ok so from 28-41 I'm pretty much listening to the same note for too long. Try changing it up a little bit there because it gets a bit boring and annoying. The other parts were good though. Lookn forward to the finished product
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This is what I am currently working on, and as far as I currently am.
Give me some critques, if any, and constructive criticism.
Please note, that this is not a final version, not complete in length and samples, but you can tell me if something drastically needs be changed or added :)
Uluse responds:
Yeah ok, well that was used as a bridge not as an actual melody. But your right, I'll see what I can come up with.
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