wow man
good job on this, your pretty good at songs with stories behind them
omg i love those tumpets at :23, there sorta in the background, they really give this an epic feel
nice chill out part
nice part after that, really makes it feel very dangerous
hmmm......my advice....well this is sorta just cuz i like this story and ide like to see it go a little longer, i think you should make a series of songs encompassing the captains journey to get to wherever the treasure is, i think right after this song(or during it or whatever), he should get eaten by the hydra, and kinda have to go through what pinochios grandpa guy had to, but thats just me
good job on this, your really good at using orchestras and stuff to capture the mood of everything
blackattackbitch 
