It's ok...

But like the person said below me, it's more ambient.

It's pretty repeatitive too.

Good start.

Sounds sort of like the beginning for a good ambient track (that said, this isn't trance, this is more or less ambient). ;)

The choir seems a bit dry. For a tune like this I would expect the "voice" to fade in and fade out proportionally, so that there's no real gap of silence in between them. The Bell is also short-lived I think. I would add some massive reverb on that (say a 4 second delay, 1k low cut, aprox. wet at 80%, 15.5kHz high damping and 40-50ish diffusion--maybe a little predelay but not too much). I don't know, those settings came off the top of my head, but that should give it a really chilly feel to add to the "spookiness" of the song. Learn what all those knobs do, too ;). Reverb is one thing you're going to be messing with a lot.

Phasering caught me a bit off guard. It's a good concept but it should really ease in to build tension (which is a major point in tracks like this). Slowly raising the FX level of the phaser as the song progresses is a good way to do this. Try adding a instrument or two also; especially something with higher-frequencies to get a more bright shearing sound while covering the high-end... maybe a couple of effects. Go crazy, but not too much. ;)

Anyway, like I said, I think it needs a bit more variation, but this is definitely grounds for a good beginning of an amazing ambient piece. :D Keep producin', man!

it actualy made me shiver!

it made me think of some one getting buried ,erg spooky