I know you and I want something more, but wow.
This has to be one of my favorite songs on this whole site. So good. Go iTunes or whatever your media player is, and search for Burial. Dubstep artist. If you want something more, adding beats, this guy is the guy you wanna take after. But anyway, this song creeps me the hell out, it has feeling, you made it in Audacity (wow), and I love it. Great job.
Only major flaw in this piece....
is the clipping. Everything else is fine. I particularly like the use of the lows for the creepy feeling.
Only things I can suggest are these:
In the beginning, maybe use less of the highpitched sound effect. Constant use detracts from the creepiness.
More creepy soundeffects like creaking and stuff like that.
Is the devil laugh really necessary at the end?
All in all, I have to say that this is a pretty damn good song for 2 hours of work.
I'd rather review a song that means a lot to you though. PM me with a song that you really want reviewed and I'll gladly review it.
it's quite spooky. Nice for a holloween type song you'd play while giving out some candy