Had Its Plain Moment.
It didn't do it for me.
I understand your idea for this piece of work was to push something across. To give people a feel of what you were portraying. But at that same time, It was basically silence. With a tiny bit of noise, and the occasional beat, But otherwise I could barely hear anything. And when I did, It wasn't amazing.
As I said, I see your trying to give off a certain vibe from this. But I just don't think that this works as a single audio submission. If it was used as background music to a certain scene of a game or movie on Newgrounds, It would fulfill its duty perfectly. But as a single audio entry, Not doing it for me.
But because I could see your setting a mood, And I could feel that mood coming alive. And also that this is up for grabs for flash artists who wish to make something of it. I gave you a 5.
Add some more... Music?
Yeah that's what the song is building up to, more music. And considering I put preview after the title, it's a fair assumption that the song is going to continue going. I'm adding parts and making it build up from noise to music, and then I plan on having it switch back or intertwine with noises; I haven't firmly decided yet.
Thanks for the lengthy review though. Not everybody has to like what they hear I suppose, but I hope the finished version reaches out to at least somebody.