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Updated 9/20: Finished!

It's a nice change of pace for me, and was an instance of my friend wrote some lyrics, I wrote music to those lyrics, and then we sat down and got the vocals worked out. I'm more than happy with how this has turned out.


Music is by me, vocals/lyrics are by my friend Taylor.

Vocals, Guitar, Bass, Piano, Synth, Drum Machine



Nice Work!

You did a great job with this song, lyrics are solid, and the instruments back up the voice so well accompanied by strong verse structures. I am starting to step into the field of writing lyrics for my music and recording them. so it is real nice to hear songs like this from other artists to help inspire me.

liked it

i cant say much about the lyrics, my english is not that good, but i can tell your friends voice is so sweet

nice song

kevs91 responds:

Thanks for the review.


So is most of this played by hand, or is it created by program?
I'd like to see more bass.
It might also be interesting if you threw in a cool varied instumental solo later in the piece to lead up to a final chorus. Better maybe two insturmental solos, in different places (piano and guitar). Just an idea.
Btw your friend has a pretty cute voice.
Good job with the song and hope you finish well.
7/10, 3/5

kevs91 responds:

It's really a mix; I'm playing the piano, I'm playing what bass guitar is in there, I'm playing guitar, and there's an external synth (which I play) and an external drum machine (which I just need to program). The rest is software synth stuff, which I simply needed to make a cool sound for and then compose.

I think it might be interesting if there were some more instrumental parts, too...

Thanks for the review!


I must have listened to this 20 times. I really like the lyrics. Not really sure how to improve it much.

I guess... I'd suggest bringing the vocals out a bit more.
This is great. =)

kevs91 responds:

Thanks for the very nice review.

I shared it with my friend, and your kind words were really nice for us both.

I'll let you know about the final piece!


Looking forward to hearing the finished product.
awesome lyrics and synth use.
A tad bit more low end bass would compliment this.
overall very nice.
Keep up the good work.

kevs91 responds:

Thank you for the exceedingly positive review.

I do have in mind a bass boost, especially for the chorus.

Thank you, I'll let you know when this gets done.

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Credits & Info


4.31 / 5.00

Sep 14, 2008
12:19 AM EDT
File Info
5.1 MB
3 min 44 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.