This is really cool. I really really really want to hear it without the drums. Unfortunately, the drums really bother me. I think you need to go back, choose new samples (like crisper and more electronic sounding) and completely redo the drums. The percussion in a song usually is meant to tie everything else together while at the same time, directly relating to every single other element. The drums here do not relate to the rest of the song at all really. I would almost say get rid of the drums all together maybe. Just a suggestion.
Everything else in the track is A OK! Love it. ;-)
It's strange to hear that, because the drums were really the skeleton of the track when I recorded it- I recorded the piano parts, then the drums, then I tried to mold everything else around those. So to me it seems like the drums fit, and even when I listen to it trying to hear a problem in them, they still seem like they fit to me. So I really don't think I'd redo the drums anytime soon, but it's interesting to know someone has a huge problem with them. In the future, I'll try to improve, obviously.
Anyways, thanks for the listen, review, criticism, and kind words.
its got alot of variaty
it sounds like it would make for good BG music for like a city or something.. but the end is kind of lame
alright, fair enough.
thanks for the review.
bargh that felt a bit random for my taste really I'd really love to hear bit more structure and such instead of that many random sounds and melodies- and it yer goin' into the lots of sounds no hierarchy thing at least do it somewhat structured lol
but well I don't know. Just didn't like it too much.
good work nevertheless
i think i'll always disagree with the "random" comments simply its never random to me, you know? but i'll work on making stuff easier to get into for people who aren't me, 'cos I guess no one else is in my head here with me. i do think there was definite structure, though, with a verse-chorus-change thing going on, and I guess the extra noise (like the two guitars and bass guitar) was just something I liked in there for the overall sound and because its always nice to hear different things every time you listen.
still, it is nice to have input, so thanks for the review.
i'll try to review something of yours once i get off this zycam-clariton-coughmedicine induced coma. so, probably tomorrow, hopefully.
It is really hard toinsert synth noise into a beat. It sounded really cool. But sadly, many people hate it when noises like that are put in music for a beat because a lot can't even tell it is a beat! Try listening to some of my songs for ideas if you would like. You could really become a great artist if you put forth enough effort. 5!!
Thanks, it does take a lot of work, especially because I'm doing most of the percussion with software, and all the synth noise from a keyboard. Luckily, when I make something I like, its always worth it. I think I've checked out your stuff before (because you might have left a review on something else of mine...) but I'll be glad to review back in the morning.
Thanks for the review, and the encouragement, and getting it, ect. Particularly needed after the first review on this :>.
Introducing Random Noises!
I think if you'd listen again, you might not find the noises to be so random? Or try headphones. I'm pretty confused right now.
I obviously need sleep.