It's strange to hear that, because the drums were really the skeleton of the track when I recorded it- I recorded the piano parts, then the drums, then I tried to mold everything else around those. So to me it seems like the drums fit, and even when I listen to it trying to hear a problem in them, they still seem like they fit to me. So I really don't think I'd redo the drums anytime soon, but it's interesting to know someone has a huge problem with them. In the future, I'll try to improve, obviously.

Anyways, thanks for the listen, review, criticism, and kind words.

alright, fair enough.

thanks for the review.

i think i'll always disagree with the "random" comments simply its never random to me, you know? but i'll work on making stuff easier to get into for people who aren't me, 'cos I guess no one else is in my head here with me. i do think there was definite structure, though, with a verse-chorus-change thing going on, and I guess the extra noise (like the two guitars and bass guitar) was just something I liked in there for the overall sound and because its always nice to hear different things every time you listen.

still, it is nice to have input, so thanks for the review.

i'll try to review something of yours once i get off this zycam-clariton-coughmedicine induced coma. so, probably tomorrow, hopefully.

Thanks, it does take a lot of work, especially because I'm doing most of the percussion with software, and all the synth noise from a keyboard. Luckily, when I make something I like, its always worth it. I think I've checked out your stuff before (because you might have left a review on something else of mine...) but I'll be glad to review back in the morning.

Thanks for the review, and the encouragement, and getting it, ect. Particularly needed after the first review on this :>.

I think if you'd listen again, you might not find the noises to be so random? Or try headphones. I'm pretty confused right now.

I obviously need sleep.