I wrote this song after a few days of learning guitar. It is basically just me soloing to a depressing chord progression, which is very similar in My Challenge To Break. I use a few of the same riffs because I like them and they are in the same key.
A lot of people like this song. Its just a depressing chord progression with a one take solo. Its pure improv. One shot, and sorry for the blinds in the backround at one part.
I made a girl cry once when she was watching me play guitar. She said I was really deep when I explained it and stuff. I like writing emotional stuff.
New stuff to come!
MAyb
If you add my Guitarnessness and some vocals and using lyrics that u wrote then it should be even better...
oh ya, and don;t forget the sweet solo
SHould I put up the original with chase? the singing sux... but the guitars are gewd!!
up 2 u...
ps. wurk on ur soloing... (come over for a lesson sometimes)< no charge$$ u went out of scale a few times, and it needs to be buttermilk smooth
Beautiful
I like this song. It's really peaceful and relaxing :)
You did a great Job here and this only after a few days of learning... wow.
More emotional stuff please!
Thanks... I am a quick learner.... and as thanks for all the reviews, I will put up another song, though it has more of a blues feel... and I accidentally deleted part of the end rhythem... it sounds good.
I'll put some more emotional stuff soon.
Summary
Not bad, with more practice you can be even better. This doesnt sound that bad. Maybe you should work on playing the same volume throughout. Good chord choices and the solo wasnt too bad.
As I said to shanzerion923, I've only been playing guitar for about a year, about 1 to 6 hours a day. Thanks. I really liked how the solo went. I was amazed when I stopped and listened to it.
Quality sucks though, because I use a built in microphone to record my music. I am actually getting a really nice Austin electric with a flying whammy and an acoustic pedal, so that will help quality. I hope to get better. I was amazed to get 2 reviews within 10 minutes of posting it. Thanks guys. Hopefully you will like more of my music.
damn.
not even a minute into the song and i like it. you must go pro! this song is awesome!
Thanks, I have only been playing guitar for about a year, and this is pretty much my favorite song I wrote, and I wrote when I was starting. I hope to go pro, but that will be awhile from now. Right now I just panhandle, and I like it.
Thanks.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Jaalave 
