If you add my Guitarnessness and some vocals and using lyrics that u wrote then it should be even better...
oh ya, and don;t forget the sweet solo
SHould I put up the original with chase? the singing sux... but the guitars are gewd!!
up 2 u...
ps. wurk on ur soloing... (come over for a lesson sometimes)< no charge$$ u went out of scale a few times, and it needs to be buttermilk smooth
I like this song. It's really peaceful and relaxing :)
You did a great Job here and this only after a few days of learning... wow.
More emotional stuff please!
Thanks... I am a quick learner.... and as thanks for all the reviews, I will put up another song, though it has more of a blues feel... and I accidentally deleted part of the end rhythem... it sounds good.
I'll put some more emotional stuff soon.
Not bad, with more practice you can be even better. This doesnt sound that bad. Maybe you should work on playing the same volume throughout. Good chord choices and the solo wasnt too bad.
As I said to shanzerion923, I've only been playing guitar for about a year, about 1 to 6 hours a day. Thanks. I really liked how the solo went. I was amazed when I stopped and listened to it.
Quality sucks though, because I use a built in microphone to record my music. I am actually getting a really nice Austin electric with a flying whammy and an acoustic pedal, so that will help quality. I hope to get better. I was amazed to get 2 reviews within 10 minutes of posting it. Thanks guys. Hopefully you will like more of my music.
not even a minute into the song and i like it. you must go pro! this song is awesome!
Thanks, I have only been playing guitar for about a year, and this is pretty much my favorite song I wrote, and I wrote when I was starting. I hope to go pro, but that will be awhile from now. Right now I just panhandle, and I like it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.