Good work, I like the chord choice and the flow. The guitar layer works nice. Maybe you could work on making the back layer stay together. I can hear at time where it doesnt quite stay. The second layer [the high one] is nice but hard to hear. Maybe you could raise the levels. I dont think you should have had that third layer right at the end. It would sound much better without it and by taking that away you could stay focused and not get a pile of guitar at once.
Ya... thanks. I like feedback, it makes my music better. I really like that you like it. This was kinda my test with playing guitar and recording it, and I was mainly just fiddleing arround. I wrote this song when I was depressed. It was kinda to show how things can build up and slowly control you, and make the little things can make your life unbearable. It's in E minor, which is my favorite key. It is so sad and dark, but it continues to show a sense of hope. I don't like the end, because it is not clean.
Thanks for the feedback... you are helping my playing.
Be sure to check out Yokomeso. He is my friend and bandmate in acoustic shows. We haven't played anything recently, but we plan on recording something soon. Check out Just Now... it was my first ever attempt at a solo.