The sky has turned black and our protagonist has just come to a sudden realization, a revelation capable of changing the events of the world. An insurmountable situation calls for epic flavor!
very good but...
It is very good, but way too short. go agood bit further with it and then make it loopable. the end could have continued to biuld up a bit. I imagine a sophisticated vilain with this.
by the way, have you ever seen an anime called read or die? this sounds like the sort of thing that would be on it.
I have never seen READ OR DIE.
i agree with the last guy.
definitely a detective game, though. murder in a graveyard, or something.
I can definitely see/hear that. Thanks.
not bad.
Could be great for a RPG. Or even like a detective game or something like that. Not very long but thats ok. Great work over all!
keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
It wasn't my intention to make it very long. It's supposed to serve an introductory song of sorts. Thanks for the review and encouraging words.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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