you really should use real instruments, kind of takes me out of the vibe
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It's a nice melody. It has room for improvement though and I think it'd be nice to hear a little bit of that. It keeps repeating until half the song is done with, I hope you improve on that first because for such a short song we should listen to something that can spark our imagination. I love music and I often use it for inspiration. This is a nice melody and has a chance to be a beautiful melody, I can hear that. I hope you work on this piece just a little more because I would love to hear it.
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I liked it a good bit. I think the samples took me out of it a bit, but I tried to not let that bug me too much, as I know isn't necessarily within the authors control (for financial or other reasons). Keep up the good work!
What do you mean the samples took you out of it? You really need to explain so I can improve on that level.
You paint a very nice picture
I can definitely see the meadow and the vines. Very good job on that.
I absolutely love the way the trumpet crescendos all the time. Also, great job on the blending of the piano and trumpet. The piano sets quite a lovely base, very moving. Then the addition of the strings makes it even better. You've built a lovely piece.
Some things you might want to consider, though, I felt it was a bit repetitive. Although repetition is the base of every song, enough variation is needed to keep your listener interested. Also, the bell at the end was just that much out of tune.
Overall, fantabulous job 4/5
It is a tad repetitive in the beginning, I should have added a bit more variation until the lead-up. The bell was a last-minute addition so that can always be taken care of. Thanks for the review.
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