I remember making songs like this when I first started on Fl Mobile lol!
Basically, I’d say just have some practice, if I were to give criticism we’d be here all day. Basically try and use less distortion, some better melodies, and some better transitions, really all you should do so far is practice, sorry for the low score.
That's okay, thanks for the honest feedback, I'm trying to improve 👍
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