Some ideas here have potential, but I would recommend learning a bit more music theory and watching some tutorials on how to mix your song. You may feel overwhelmed at first, but over time you’ll improve and find that it’s truly worth it to pursue music creation as a hobby. Best of luck, remember to have fun with it!!

Ok bro, again, just some practice, I also highly doubt this took 4 hours to make, if it did then, ummm I don’t know what to say 😶‍🌫️.

Melodies seem better, it’s just transitions and things could be better mixed.

(Sorry if I sound rude, but I seriously doubt this did take 4 hrs. Forgive me if I sound rude, your new to this, I get it lol)