Felt a lttle overdue to posting something new. It's also been awhile since I was really inspired/motivated to write something and see it through to the finish. I think I rushed it a bit at the end, but I'm done playing with it at the moment.
Lyrics:
Too many times before
I feel I’ve been here
Yea, it all feels so fucking familiar
I tear down, all the walls
Stripped them bare
Just to find
That there’s nothing there
It’s been proven time and time again
That in this life
The bullshit you find
Is all the same
A never ending plight
It’s cut, create
Molded and reshaped
From the pain
This is basis of our lives
Denigrated and patronized
Manipulated; to fall in line
Breaking down, the social structure
But as it fails, (as it fails)
We turn on one another
And it’s happened, time and time again
We break ourselves
Just to help them thin the numbers
Trim the fat
Bled dry from all we had
Rip it out
The silver tongue laced in bile
They push it down
Our throats until we’re in denial
Oh God, It’s never ending
Break me free
The composition's nice, and catches you off guard when the rhythm break occurs because you're expecting it to go another beat. Keeps you listening that way.
The compressor decay's a bit too off on the drums, and it causes some popping when there's both a crash and snare snap at the same time. That and the toms cause a fair bit of frequency bleed at the low end. That makes it difficult to listen to, especially on headphones.
Thank you for listening. And I really appreciate you taking the time to leave some constructive feedback! Thanks!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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