I like it because I also feel you sisters pain because I have thoughts of killing myself
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I was going to post up a different song, but I wanted to put this together quickly. This song is dedicated to my best friend/my sister, who's having a really tough time right now. I wrote the instrumentals a couple years ago, and was originally going to go a different direction with lyrics, but wanted to write something meaningful and with her in my mind these lyrics poured out in about 20 minutes. I'll probably tweak the vocals a bit overtime, but I wanted to get this out there.
Even though it's for my sister, I hope this will reach anyone who may be feeling suicidal and like all hope is gone. I've been there myself, many times and wasn't that long ago that I had actually tried it.
Lyrics:
Are you feeling
Like you’ve burned too bright
You got a dangerous mind
When you fade inside
You’re alone, lost
Destabilized
I know you feel it now
The walls are breaking down
Now’s the time to fight
Find the strength; hold on
I know this moment hurts
Remember these words
In the end you’ll understand
Just hold on
Are you reeling
From the all the highs
Now you’re crashing
Down below
Are you aching
For a better time
When you didn’t feel alone
I know you feel it now
The walls are breaking down
Now’s the time to fight
Find the strength; hold on
I know this moment hurts
Remember these words
In the end you’ll understand
Just hold on
Fight, I hope you'll fight
Remember why you fight
I know you’re feeling broken
Hopeless, like no one hears your cries
When you’re damaged and desperate
That’s when we come alive
You are worthy, you are loved
God just hold on
When the moments gone
And you see with clearer eyes
I know you’ll look back at
The life you left behind
You can feel the pride
Appreciate your life
And I hope you’ll help someone else
To just hold on
I like it because I also feel you sisters pain because I have thoughts of killing myself
This one is really on another level. The layers are well incorporated, and I really digg the changes in total volume. The drum composition is solid. I feel that the hard compression removes some of the powerful effect of your shotgun snare drum. The vocals are well-recorded and they do sound great. All effects are well composed and implemented. I love the section following 3:02. Excellent performance.
thank you so much! I'm glad to hear my vocals are improving. I honestly wasn't too happy with them at first on this track. I felt I rushed it, and the quality was sacrificed. Sometimes I'm too hard on myself. I appreciate you listening and the feedback!
OH THIS GOESSSSSSSSS... extremely professional mixing and vocals... really great... and the message is an important one too.... very well done!
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you liked it!
This is excellent! I often do not bother logging in when I'm listening to music on new grounds but I had to log on today to let you know how great this song is.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.