Tuesday, September 17, 2024
10:30 PM

Oh boy, this one is a ride. I like the pic that you have compared to what you've got in your song. Definitely makes sense. I really do like the feel of this, and I get the sense that it won't be for everyone. However, I do wish the mix wasn't as tiring. Honestly this has a bit of brilliance I think. I wouldn't expect something that sounds so haphazard to work as well as it does. Almost like you failed at making a song for the Newgrounds worst song contest. You've got a rhythmic motif that you revisit and explore, and the whistle/flute that you break to, like at 0:45, feels like it works. You do have some issues with instrumentation that makes it feel like it's not in the same environment. For examples, the rest of the orchestral elements at 0:54, and the harsh guitar like synth at 1:02. They both sound cheap and dry compared to the rest of what you have.

Okay hold on, you started 4 hours before the deadline and made this??? I'm not even mad. I applaud this

I feel about this track essentially a mix between @creeperforce24's review and your own response to it. This has some truly exceptional moments which satisfy my ADHD brain. A revisit to instrument balance, clarity, and eq on some instruments and this would get close to a full ten from me though. I love the arrangement and colors chosen.

Hella reminds me of the sort of 60s songs, except you truly went random bullshit go on it.

It sounds both nice, and terrible at the same time, how did you even manage to do that! 0_0

Melody has a not so great mix along with drums, until you get to 0:40 where it starts to have some cinematic and cute strings, before cutting back to the chaotic organized mess.

I’m actually not sure on what this is, it sounds good, and sounds like some sort of musical animation. Nicely terrible, terribly nice

Oh that's a crazy one! (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧
Pretty wonderful part with the flutes, strings and cool synth part on the end!