I like the strong emphasis on the downbeats and the frantic string lines in between. It sounds like a large, lumbering beast indeed, almost like the camera is viewing the tortuga from the perspective of an ant. The mix is very quiet, though, and the melodies at :47 could be a bit more up-front in the mix. The composition could be a bit more fleshed-out and variational, but the content you have here now is still evocative and well-orchestrated. Keep at it, IglicaV! Thanks for coming out to the NGUAC. ^_^
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
7.5/10