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Lacerations and Burns - 裂傷熱傷

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I tried making "Rock 'n' Roll" for the first time!


[YouTube Video]

https://youtu.be/g-7VFS9Kce4


Lyrics:

Kawarugawaru owaranai gensō

Mawarumawaru todokanai tenjō

Tokei no hari ga kurukuru kurutte

Happy! shigyakusei no kenkō-sa


Sakebu sakebu konoyo no sakeme tachi

Tōku tōku tsudzuku wa chi no wadachi

Saihate no kuro-nuri no rakuen ni

Go kyōminakerya koko de o wakare-sa


Kuchi o osae tenai to

Haitte ki chau kamo yo


Resshō resshō, kamisori no ame

Nesshō nesshō, furishikiru naka no

Rettō rettō, dai kōkai sa

Ryūsan no nami funazoko o uchitsukeru


Resshō resshō, akirame no uta ni

Nesshō nesshō, nagasu namida sura

Rettō rettō, kare hateta no sa

Waiya wa mieru toko ni oite oite ne


Kawaku kawaki kanjō no kansō

Yotei chōwa karetsunaru enjō

Nagekoma reshi rengoku wa kensō

Lucky! koko ga boku no shinibasho-sa


Aruku aruku jakusha no sōretsu

Nagaku nagaku an'neina ketsuretsu

Kumo no ito ni wakimemofurazu ni

Goyō ga sundara taisan shimasho


Resshō resshō, kamisori no ame

Nesshō nesshō, furishikiru naka no

Rettō rettō, dai kōkai sa

Ryūsan no nami funazoko o uchitsukeru


Resshō resshō, akirame no uta ni

Nesshō nesshō, nagasu namida sura

Rettō rettō, kare hateta no sa

Rōpu wa todoku toko ni oite oite ne

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Very good for your first attempt at this type of song. If you like trying out different genres, have you ever thought about doing ska?

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!
I've never heard of the ska genre before, but it sounds very nice music! I don't know much about music genres, but the YouTube video "Vinyl Selection - 60's Ska Special" was helpful.

Yeah, definitely needs some more clean and strong human singing

Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!! Humans are still very strong in this field.

Cool song overall, though honestly I feel like it would have benefitted from proper vocals rather than the vocaloid style (although it is far less feasible to find a real Japanese female vocalist). I enjoy vocaloid sometimes but I think for a more "rocking" tune like this one, it benefits from a singer with a bit more human emotion rather than the more robotic feel of vocaloid. Still a fun song overall though.

Precipitation24 responds:

How did you find out?! Exactly as you pointed out, one of my themes was to make a song that could be sung by a Japanese singer Ado, but I did not think it was necessary to mention it here. I wish Ado would sing the song, but I know she won't even be aware of it LOL

Credits & Info


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Faves:
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Votes
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Score
4.29 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 12, 2022
2:56 PM EDT
Genre
Classic Rock
File Info
Song
2.7 MB
2 min 20 sec

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