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Noticed a few good elements such as the sliding and they did a good job~
Well I always use headphones anyway lolz. Um one thing I might want to bring to notice is the lack of... how you say uhh... oh yea mixing. See the bass was a lil too strong and took away from the percussion. That and the kick too.
:D One thing you might like is adding reeverb to certain intruments like the HiHat or kick, but it's very delicate in procedure 'cause these things take a lot of time and can screw up a song if done too hastily.
Nice effort though. With a lil bit of mixing your stuff would be even better :3
Surge