patting yourself on the back
well im goin gto tell you not to pat yourself on the back just yet lol! because once you know you did well remember there is room to improve, but im going to tell you that it isnt time for you to do that yet because im going to do it for you.
ok well went i first heard the song at the beginning i felt good. i really liked the instruemnt orbanjo that you love so much, it actually fit in pretty well. at :37 i disagreed with the side chained part some, it sounded great but musicly i wasnt sure.
the drums on this track were all very great, i loved your patterns i know you made those just right.
at 1:40 if you made that synth i am proud of you.
you really took time on the intro to this song holy crap, it sounds great, and i am really impressed that you introduced the themes in a smart way by having little fragments of the musical elements kkinda faded andwaving in and out so as to accent the atmosphere! GREAT ideas. the delay on that banjo was really cool! good work there. i really felt and heard water in this.
the side chained pads were great. it made the atmosphere really enjoyable, you really had alot of pads in here that made the song incredible at 3:51 that synth you chose for the little melodical part was a good choice
at 3:32 i liked the drums you had snapping in with the delay, good distraction. sory but at by 3:05 i expected a buildto the next part i felt that dragged out a little.
there was an acid synth towards the end that was really cool.
good idea to have those panning variantions of the main bas at the end but it was a little too crazy for me, and this looped really well.
i am giving you a solid 4 on this because i rarely give solid 5's and a solid four is sayign alot from me, and there were some musical elements i wasnt sure aount so that was my doubt.
im giving you an 8/10 because you have improved much on this piece. and also its an awesome song.
something in this feels like your mastering was completely different this time around because things sound more clear.