ahhh remasters, oh how i love going back to an old track, and polish it up with the skills i have right now. (possibly make it worse than it already was xd)
i'd tame the trebles of your guitars a bit by cutting them with an eq... and maybe detect the ringing sounds and cut them too. comparing the remaster to the original, this really does seem a whole lot better. the first part seems to be lacking a lot in the bottom half of the frequency spectrum tho, might want to check up on that, cause idk if it's a recording problem or not. the heavy guitars seem a bit too heavy tho, they seem to be washing up most of the sounds in the first part. second part is okay. i liked the guitar playing, my favorite section is somewhere near the end part where you do those pitch bends. nice stuff.
overall, nothing much to comment on this since it is a very simple indie rock song...