I noticed this is a cover, so I'm not familiar with the original. The intro's not bad, when the vocals come in I can't really make out what they're saying. But they sound like sampled recordings. And it sounds like the same thing said over and over. I'm 4 minutes in and this is getting really repetitive. Honestly if a song is going to be over 9 minutes long there should be some variation in it. I feel like you could've shortened it to a few minutes. I listened to the whole thing and you know, many of my pieces have repetition but at least some variations throughout, adding/changing instruments, changing the beat up, adding a completely different section would help this out a lot. As it stands now it is very repetitive and I don't know if it would hold anyone's attention for 9 minutes and 41 seconds. Sorry but I think you should re-work this one. Keep the main sections then change it up some way(s). Then you can go back to the main section but add something to it. I had to wait 9 minutes 19 seconds for any kind of change, and that's way too long. Revisit this piece and I'll review it again, just put it up in my review thread when it's ready. For now I'll give it 3/5 because I do like it but the length is not justified.