wow beautiful
Wow this was beautiful piece you have here, some nice sounds and that whole 16th century is a nice touch of it all, it really does sound like that, I can see you adding to this as it was somewhat short maybe pick up the beat a bit with some build up and such.
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A nice build up can go a long way and with this one I can see you pulling that off and build ups make it that much better, even some build downs would be a plus.
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