The second track I made for my friends VN that I don't know the name of.

I re-used the melody of the first track because I just like it when game re-use old melodies in a different style. It makes the whole OST sound a lot more cohesive. You can't get away with it all the time but it certainly adds to it where it matters.

Listening to it again after a bit reminds me of a few things. I personally feel that this is the weakest of the tracks that I made for my friends VN but at the same time it's not bad. I don't quite know what to do about it so I'll leave it as is. It just doesn't feel right I can't really explain further.

The only real minor thing I would change is either change the main instrument from an ocarina to something less piercing or lower it a teeny tiny bit. After a few repeat listens it's easy to imagine that it gets a bit annoying trying to read text on screen while it's playing.

The track is alright I don't really have much to say.