this is gorgeous man
Lyrics:
Sweetie Linda
You ain’t looking so well
Like someone’s given you a bout of hell
And called ya names
None of which I know you’d claim
Thought I told ya
This ain’t a place where you belong
Get out now before it all goes wrong
Or explain
Why’s it worth all the pain
And you say
“Purple’s a pretty color anyway”
But all them scars and violent marks on you
Won’t fade away
Sweetie Linda
The kids’ll understand
The back of another lover’s hand
To lay waste
To what’s left of a beautiful face
I left ya money
By your smokes with a note
This’ll help ya get out and go
But it’s spent
And we both know where it went
And you say
“I’ll be better off if I stay”
The son you called your number one
Has gone and ran away
Sweetie Linda
They spoke your name across station to station
And cried “Eureka!”
“Done in by her own stagnation”
Sweetie Linda
At the crossroads you were found
Ya became the shadow
Casted when the Sun dies down
Down
Died down
Your picture’s taken over the town
Ya always came to me to keep you clean
But I couldn’t quite clean you out
this is gorgeous man
Aw thanks! I was gonna get more stuff together and try to throw it up on SC eventually, might do YT too but I don't know if it's really good enough to slingshot out there
Dry the rain, beta band.
Literally know the chords and tune ha.
Nice take, you know what my issues are so are they worth repeating? My doors open any time, i can do miracles for you.
That acoustic layered over electric chords is heavenly.
Journey of a build up too, pairs well with the story your telling with the lyrics. A couple of beat/tempo inconsistencies aside, pretty well produced over all.
Nice track, man. You’re a great story teller.
Thanks! Yeah I ran outta time for fixing the inconsistencies, I still wanna but it'll probably be a bit before I can. The song is about my mother, thanks again
Great song, with a bit of mix-mastering work could definitely sound a bit better but I understand the struggle working with a bedroom studio
Not even a whole bedroom, just a little corner hahaha
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