Voice reminds me of Elliott Smith
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Lyrics:
The moon’s been bleeding white
Cast down like a prison’s searchlight
With shaky hands and devil sands
Thrown around to spread the putrid blight
A sideways walk and maudlin
Pickle livered and river faced
The time spent, came and went
Was nothin but a total waste
What’ll it cost you
To treat a by-blow like me nice
I’ll pay the price
If a little bad luck’ll suffice
I didn’t mean to scare you
But sometimes it’s hard to keep it contained
Trees scarred with names in hearts
Are about the only thing that remain
God get me outta this hell hole
Take me on down to the tracks
And dangle hope from the end of my rope
And cover up these hideous acts
What’ll it cost you
To treat a by-blow like me nice
I’ll pay the price
If a headful of regret’ll suffice
Voice reminds me of Elliott Smith
my man!
All this needs is some uplift comp and exciting. Love the tune, love the vox.
All the work here is in post.
keep it up
Nice and mellow. Loving the retro 3-band E/Q feel to it too. Reminds me of better times haha. Nice lyrics too.
Thanks, I had to record this in a cramped corner of a garage, my back still hurts haunching over a mic with an acoustic and for singing. Thanks a lot for the kind review :)
I really dig the lead guitar in the middle. Overall a very catchy song, it brings out my feels
Ah thanks, means a lot to be able to make someone feel something at all with music. Thanks a lot for lettin me know :)
pretty nice.
very melancholy.
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