Good character BUT
I like the irregular shape having in the drawing, they are perfect with your style, but would like to see the whole body of max and not just your faceand you think you have to work a little Yvette's eyes as they find that are far from the nose (or perhaps my perspective).
I don't really know why I had Max cropped off like that. I intended to have him sitting down, but I don't think I got that across. He just looks a little awkward like that. You've got a big point there.
As for Yvette's eyes, I never thought about that, but I guess you might be right. They're a tad too high.
Thanks for yet another review.
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