not horrible
it wasn't horrible,and don't listen to that pussy who wrote "you can't EVER EVER EVER rush art. patience young grass hopper... " wait is that guy a fucking pussy. I actually want to kill his children.
Reviews for "Unforeseen"
Hmm
Other people have done this idea, and done it better. No sale, I'm afraid.
I dont' get it
what was that about? i don't understand. just few clips thrown together. the sword slashing effects don't sound right. and the music clips a cut poorly. fade them in and out instead of just stopping them suddenly. next time, sit back, take your time and plan it out a little. draw a story board on papper first ( like a simple comic) then do the animation. (that's how pros on tv do it) you have some cool drawings and the action is fast paced and doesn't just sit there forever like other people's work i've seen. so you have that part down. make it a little more understanding. I can tell you are really itching to get you work shown but you can't EVER EVER EVER rush art. patience young grass hopper... patience is the key. long hard work is worth it and you've definetly got something. go for it dude.
Make a loader....
Add some sound. Swords don't cut like that. And the same guy was waivy even when he was inside a building. It was typical stuff. But if your going to try to develop the story later into then do so. Because this makes me want to avoid it all together.