Ninja?
My only two complaints is not enough plot (but you did convey atmosphere), and the bodies shake too much.
Reviews for "Unforeseen"
it was ok
it wasnt anything special, but it would have been better if it had some plot. make another, and make it understandable.
[plz reply, i tried to review it with my heftiest pair of rose-tinted spectacles on, but they were too big for my nose]
shortymcallister responds:
I guess i wasn't going for much plot, i was just shooting the shit on flash. it is only 290 kb, so i couldn't write a novel. I will get better, just look at my other stuff, i just send it in the find out what viewers want from the finla prodcut. Reviews like this are helpful
started ok
man you have to spend more time on your flash movies, ive seen all of yours and they arent that good. 1 good flash is better than 7 crappy ones
Ahahahah oh wow
not horrible
it wasn't horrible,and don't listen to that pussy who wrote "you can't EVER EVER EVER rush art. patience young grass hopper... " wait is that guy a fucking pussy. I actually want to kill his children.