Make a loader....
Add some sound. Swords don't cut like that. And the same guy was waivy even when he was inside a building. It was typical stuff. But if your going to try to develop the story later into then do so. Because this makes me want to avoid it all together.
I really really liked it!
Very nice artwork and animation, music was fitting. One thing though... the ninja completely destroyed those three guards, and then got killed by a measly gun... that's why I put 1 for humor because he died so craptastically. I liken his death to that of a death in Vampire Hunter D. When they're on the bridge, and that guy gets killed... I forget what happens exactly... I was a little tired when I watched, and it was over a year ago.. but he just dies so suddenly.
ANYWAY... great job! **spoilers** I love the end... my imagination, (along with most other people I assume), leads me to believe he shot himself but... who knows?? You say there's going to be more?? Well I personally can't wait!
I couldn't get it to load
Just so you know
not bad
this was actully pretty good what do u mean with ur authors notes