Great visuals and color, but there's something about the writing and comedic timing that seems made to drag out what's going on longer than it needs to be. There wasn't really any enjoyable comedy in the fact that Gramps wouldn't just tell Hayley what she was supposed to be doing. All movie he just "doesn't have time for this" but just gave her a scythe and tells her nothing and is just facepalming at the fact that she's not doing anything right with it, I found that more frustrating than comical. They don't seem like thinking characters/adults, just puppets being strung along for a lot of forced "Oh, you just don't get it!" humor, and all this made the film feel unnecessarily padded out. Storyboards are a little bland, but designs and color look great other than that. If you've been working on it for years, I have a hard time seeing future episodes not being way better.
Reviews for "The Dark Harvest - Episode 1"
the video and concept are good but the dark harvest is already the name of a slender man series.
Shaggy is dead.
amazing work!
Wow
Wow this was intense the "VISUAL" effects you have presented in this are pretty "GOOD" really nice animation and characters, maybe adding some subtitles would improve on this submission not that it needs it but its like an extra feature to have, OK so you really do have something decent here, and its Unanimous that this is a highly popular entry, there is no Disinterest in this submission, as you have put down all the elements and gone even further, so nice efforts and really good entry, now ofcourse if I find anything to help I will suggest some ideas later, but sofar you have a good entry.
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maybe adding some subtitles would improve on this submission not that it needs it but its like an extra feature to have
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