Bello!
Reviews for "No Hexy"
Fafri responds:
Grazie! :D
A very beautiful game with a story that hit close to home.
Not bad, but needs choices and different endings
Very interesting and sad concept, but I would, as already mentioned down below, suggest you to add different choices/paths. Other than that, good game.
Hello! Very good job aesthetically, but as narrative is the most important factor with such games, it could need some more work. First, do some strong proofreading to correct some syntax and grammar errors that may distract from immersion. Also, there is no need for the humanish sound effects. They are shapes, silent. The bullying in the bathroom could be understood without the fight sounds. I am also not sure about how I felt about the death of the first bully-triangle and if it made me care more. However, it would help explain the parents' detachment. Also, not sure I liked the cheating part and how it was played out. On the other hand, as this is art, I can be excused to have some pieces that didn't appeal that much to me, maybe as I have solved some of the matters you discuss through your artful game.
All in all, more than simply passable for me, good job. Fix some of the syntax and grammar errors, if you need help feel free to contact me with your text and I'll happily do it for you, and keep it up.
Fafri responds:
Thanks for your feedback, it has been very useful! I really like the fact that you gave a different meaning to one of the last scenes (the one about the cheating). In my head it isn't a cheating but a different thing so it's funny to see how the players see the scenes in a different way :D