I enjoyed it.
Reviews for "Love at first bite"
i kinda feel you were inspired by that visual novel with the one eyed girl(i forgot its name)
KoltonKennedy responds:
YES! you're right. That visual novel did inspire me.
I liked it.
your art is good (hope its original) but please, go out of your way to improve your writing. It currently has nothing too amazing about it.
KoltonKennedy responds:
Thanks! My art is not that great, but it's original. The story however, I think of it...on the spot. I have no time to write it down. That's why it's not perfect.
The story is tritely, but it so cute!
Please, make more if you can.