Reviews for Love at first bite

[homiloko]

Uhm, the concept is good and the graphics are alright, but the dialogue looks like it was written by a 12 year old. No offense, it simply wasn't that interesting. There was no real sexual tension or flirting, the main character was spineless and reactive and didn't really do anything the whole game.. I don't even see how Hanako could fall for him lol.

The story and characters were too one-dimensional, Hanako is the misunderstood ghoul who is actually a good person and MC is the nice guy who goes along with everything. There's no depth. Work on your writing! Other than that, good job on making the game. It was interesting enough to get me all the way to the end.

[NusantaraGame]

well, i like this game so much

[Txc]

Game Good and Story nice really ^_^ backgrounds really need to update and game really Good

[Helleos]

Every once in a while, I come across a bland story that, to my surprise, sucks me in and really manages to get me invested to the point I become a big fan of the fiction. This story feels like the inverse of that where both just need a little more of what the other offers.

The premise really interested me and had a lot of potential for something great, but I have to say that the execution could use some work. People have already pointed out the cliches and such, but I don't even mind those if the writing was well-made.
I'm not going to claim I know exactly what would make great dialogue, but for most of this story, I felt I could more or less guess exactly what the characters would each say. I liked the characters well enough, but I had no real investment into them as people. The consequence is me quickly clicking through most of the dialogue and getting the story off a general gist of what the characters are saying.

Good premise, but it's craving a brilliant execution to make it a truly great work.

[Dragopaulo]

So much Shoujo cliches(who the hell slip on a piece of paper?), but I liked the main characters, and the art is very good. The only thing bad, is when I refresh the page, I lost my progress, and the date sim was locked again. There is a way to save and didn't see?

KoltonKennedy responds:

Sorry about that.
There's no way to save. Just play through it a second time or skip the whole thing.