Okay, now that was anticlimactic. "She will find you." That describes everyone from your mother up to your psychotic ex-GF. And sometimes co-workers.
Sorry - even the dialogue can't save this one. Choppy, plotless, random switches - it's the platform equivalent of an "escape the room."
That being said, for a last-minute final, it ain't half bad. but it ain't half good either. If it was me, I'd cut the "*inaudible*" out of the dialogue completely. If it's inaudible, why is it on a recording? Better words can be found.
The concept of a she/he/it/thing/nameless horror is old stuff. But it can be done well, with the proper setup. I would recommend studying Edgar Allen Poe or H. P. Lovecraft for guidance. Then drink heavily to avoid nightmares.
Long and short, 3/5. you got a good seed, but it needs longer to grow. Put this one away, then look at it again in six months. Think Metroid.